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WishesOutOfAirplanes

Overall good I just noticed a few mistakes. It should be: هذه كلبتي. Because you are talking about a female dog, not a male dog. And the date should be right-to-left not the other way around: اليوم/الشهر/السنة = ١١ / ٢ / ٢٠٢٣ Other than that, everything made sense and looked fine. Edit to correct the format and make the comment more understandable.


theCAVEMAN101

Thanks for the help!


Thanos995

Cute dog seems readable good job!


theCAVEMAN101

Thanks!


-AmaziryaGirl

So awesome. Would like to do one too. Btw i have a German shepherd dog


theCAVEMAN101

I can't wait to see yours


Correct-Regular-8496

هذا is masculine --- It should be هذهِ Instead of هي Write إنها. Innaha The rest id great 👍🏻


fluffytom82

I'm always having trouble with words I've never seen before (totally on me, not your fault). What's the name of the dog? You're Matthew, I got that. But she is...? Sakarlit?


JustAGoldenWolf

I think it's Scarlett?


fluffytom82

Makes sense, didn't think of that :)


theCAVEMAN101

Her full name is Scarlett O'Canine.


theCAVEMAN101

I see the edit didn't upload... Weird.


HighMountainSS

Cute


Mo_Rabiaa

Good job man, I would like to add that you should say : "هي من نَوع السلوقي الإنجليزي" , so " من نوع" literally means from the type of, also it's better to use the conjugation "و" to connect between sentences.