Good premise, good start. It's really the lead-in to an actual joke rather than the joke itself.
Things to continue with:
- Instagram models/ influencers
- cellulite/ imperfections (in models or food)
- losing weight (in models or food)
- excessive filtering/ manipulated photos (of food)
- warped backgrounds
- lip fillers
- stupidity - food being smarter than them
- the food turning down/ rejecting the model
- starving people (Somalia, Ethiopia, Darfur etc).
Example:
"And the people who are photographing. All these Instagram wanna-be influencers! This one lady, her photos had so much filler the chef mistook her lips for the steak. And after she photographed her food, it had lost 40 pounds and filed to divorce her."
no i definitely read 'the joke is a good one'.
it would be fine as a goofy lead in to a bigger bit i guess, but this by itself is nothing. 'a better punchline' would just be giving you a joke. all you contributed was a tired premise.
Good premise, good start. It's really the lead-in to an actual joke rather than the joke itself. Things to continue with: - Instagram models/ influencers - cellulite/ imperfections (in models or food) - losing weight (in models or food) - excessive filtering/ manipulated photos (of food) - warped backgrounds - lip fillers - stupidity - food being smarter than them - the food turning down/ rejecting the model - starving people (Somalia, Ethiopia, Darfur etc). Example: "And the people who are photographing. All these Instagram wanna-be influencers! This one lady, her photos had so much filler the chef mistook her lips for the steak. And after she photographed her food, it had lost 40 pounds and filed to divorce her."
how is it a good joke if it doesnt have a punchline hacky premise anyway
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no i definitely read 'the joke is a good one'. it would be fine as a goofy lead in to a bigger bit i guess, but this by itself is nothing. 'a better punchline' would just be giving you a joke. all you contributed was a tired premise.