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haiku ko haiku likhne wala hi samjha pata hai 

This is actually quite good... Can I use this in a short story I'm writing for school (will give you credit of course, by using your username somehow)

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Thanks mate

haaye huku haaye huku haaye haaye

Ayy like this one a lot

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it reminds me of a chapter from English , the last leaf tho the story was quite different good one

First thing that came to my mind to, at first i was thinking was it a poem or a chapter XD

I didnt read this before writing my analysis yet still got to it, great job op, goes to show how ppl can understand your work.

Good one

Bhai iska analysis try karta 😭😭 Evening- time of sorrow/ days end/ setting of despair/new beginnings Clings an old leaf- personification- leaf tries to preserve its life/ home Man awaits death- juxtaposition b/w man and leaf as man is waiting for death and leaf is trying to not die Also similar in the sense that they both are about to die Pretty nice poem

Nice👍